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My anatomy and backgroundskills are still as wonky as a drunk small child.
Do not use without permission. All artwork is (c) to Caleb J. Andrews (T0xicEye). Characters are (c) to their respective owner/s. All rights reserved. Do not alter, copy, and/or redistribute.
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Next: My anatomy and backgroundskills are still as wonky as a drunk small child.
Do not use without permission. All artwork is (c) to Caleb J. Andrews (T0xicEye). Characters are (c) to their respective owner/s. All rights reserved. Do not alter, copy, and/or redistribute.
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Nah, the art looks perfect! As high quality and lovely as always ^^
I really love the shading on these pages, it fits so perfectly.
The dialogue for the spirit is very hard to read. In fact I couldn't... make out anything in that second or third balloon. Either a darker outline to the words or a change in the words colors would help a lot. As well, I am assuming that second panel's balloons are to be read back and forth between him and the spirit? I didn't catch that at first since the two sets are in totally different panels. To achieve that affect you'll have to significantly overlap that last balloons by the spirit over and between those two dialogues to the right. Otherwise it's difficult to read properly since there is no cue except that the dialogue makes little sense.
I really love the shading on these pages, it fits so perfectly.
The dialogue for the spirit is very hard to read. In fact I couldn't... make out anything in that second or third balloon. Either a darker outline to the words or a change in the words colors would help a lot. As well, I am assuming that second panel's balloons are to be read back and forth between him and the spirit? I didn't catch that at first since the two sets are in totally different panels. To achieve that affect you'll have to significantly overlap that last balloons by the spirit over and between those two dialogues to the right. Otherwise it's difficult to read properly since there is no cue except that the dialogue makes little sense.